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Wednesday, February 21st, 2007
12:36 am
[veiledbeloved]
this is a piece of writing that I've been working on for a while.  I have a bunch of little snippets done, and I wanted to put one up for people to see, and ask for comments.  ANYTHING would be helpful.  Thanks so much!

Sunday, July 16th, 2006
12:31 am
[bardkris]
Challenge.
I'm throwing the gauntlet down. Consider yourself challenged.

Unlikely Heroes? Pick a historical figure whose actions you've always questioned or hated. I'd rather it be someone who you had an emotional reaction to, but anyone whose actions you've questioned will do. Idi Amin, James Earl Ray, Judas, Nero, Adolf Hitler... the list goes on. Anyway, do a little research and see if you can think of a story that would justify their actions to you. Go as sci-fi as you want, but make them have a reason.

So what do you think?
Sunday, June 25th, 2006
11:47 pm
[azurecobalt]
It all started with a tabloid talk show.

Marilyn Johnson, a 48 year-old housewife from Jacksonville, Mississippi appeared on one of those trashy daytime television shows to tell the well-groomed host how she'd avoided getting on a doomed airline flight due to a message that had been sent from the future.

A housewife and happy mother of four young children, Marilyn thanked god and her toddler, Dennis, for one day sending word back to his mama to not going to the airport that day.

John had laughed when he'd watched the show. His wife, Leslie, always watched those kind of programs. As a medical transcriptionist who spent her days working from home, she'd often have the television tuned to them in the background. When he'd make fun of her for it, she'd only smile and say, "You always see the good in people. This shows there's a darker side, too."

But the story hadn't stopped there. Next came the story of a naval officer from Anchorage, Alaska. He guessed the number of the winning suitcase on a game show, winning a million dollars. When the host asked him how he'd known the correct number, he answered that he'd received a message from his future self. Everyone laughed, of course, but John noticed a similarity to Marilyn's story. Both said they'd seen the message written in a mysterious fashion: Marilyn saw her warning drawn into the dusty surface of her large-screen television, while the naval officer had seen the winning number dug - before his very eyes! - into the snow in his front yard.

He mentioned the similarities of the stories to his next-door neighbor, Mark, one day while getting the paper before breakfast. Mark had only laughed. "Oh, people say the funniest things after events like those. Some lottery winners say they saw the numbers in a dream. It doesn't mean anything. Just go to work, pal!"

John nodded and headed inside, but he couldn't get the notion out of his head. A message from the future! It held such possibilities. Beyond the winning lottery numbers, it could hold a glimpse of the future. Would the world be a better place? What would his life be like? Should he leave his job and pursue something else, as he'd often considered, or should he stick it out at the law firm? Should he and Leslie have a child, as he'd hoped? Leslie always said they weren't financially stable enough, but maybe in the future their fortunes would change...

All these things floated through John's head as he toweled off after his shower. The small bathroom was steamy from the heat, and as he dried his hair, a flicker of movement caught his attention. He turned, noticing the fogged-over bathroom mirror. On one corner of the mirror, a small clear patch stood out. Then, as he examined the oddity, the patch spread, as if an invisible finger was drawing on the surface.

John dropped his towel, stunned by the supernatural writing as it scrawled across the mirror. "Don't be afraid," it slowly wrote with a squeaky precision. "It's you - from the future."

His eyes wide, John moved closer. The stories were true! It was possible to send messages into the past! What knowledge would his future self impart from the hereafter? A warning, perhaps? Or advice that would make his life better?

"Trust me," the writing read as it gradually appeared through the haze, the handwriting unmistakable as his own, "you have to leave"...

John gripped the sides of the sink. "Leave? Why? Where? Tell me!"

As John's stomach turned, the message continued relentlessly. "...you have to leave Leslie. She's sleeping with Mark."

When searching the home later that day, the police found a shattered mirror in the bathroom just beyond where Leslie's lifeless body lay. Her husband incoherently mumbled something about messages from the future and his wife's infidelity as they dragged him from the scene, blood coating his naked body.

Current Mood: tired
Friday, June 23rd, 2006
9:48 pm
[sir_loinage]
challenge
okay, heres a challenge. first, list your genre of choice. what style do you write? what time frame? what point of view? etc. What type of writing is your most comfortable.

then write a piece, whatever length etc. that is absolutely out of your comfort zone.

post behind an lj-cut and have fun with it.
6:37 am
[bardkris]
Hi. I'm new, and this community does not seem to have much traffic.

My name is Kris. I write a great deal, and am interested in readers, and additionally in reading other people's work. Most of my writing is looking an attempt at different perspectives, and I find it easiest to work in malleable realities like sci-fi, fantasy, and horror.

I've noticed you guys polled that you wanted writing challenges, but it doesn't seem that there have been many. I'm new, and thus suspect, but would you mind if I proposed some?

I've never really had writer's block, but I have tremendous sympathy for people who do (like my girlfriend), because it seems to me that that would be like being excommunicated, removed from the presence of a personal god. I've got a lot of really interesting ideas that I'm sure I have a very limited scope on. I'd love to get some other opinions on them. Anyone interested? Is this even allowed from a new member?
Saturday, January 28th, 2006
10:58 pm
[azurecobalt]
20 Questions...
Here's the "Get To Know You" thread. Since we'll be sharing our writing with each other, we might as well get to know one another! Reply in comments with your response.

1. What is the name you prefer to go by?

2. What is your age, and do you feel it reflects you?

3. What is your day job, and do you like it?

4. Why did you join this community?

5. What is an interesting fact about you?

...onto the writing questions...

6. How much of your writing draws on your own experiences?

7. What is your "writing process"?

8. Who are your favorite authors to read?

9. What is your favorite genre to read?

10. Do you find it easy to write, and do you get "writer's block"?

11. Have you ever had something published? If not, would you like to, or is your writing private?

12. How often do you write?

13. Have you ever taken a class in writing?

14. How do you prefer to write - with a word processing program, pen and paper, something else?

15. How confident are you in your own writing?

16. How do you get ideas for your writing, and when do you get them - in the shower, from dreams, daydreaming, or in other ways?

17. When do you do most of your writing - morning, middle of the day, middle of the night?

18. Who do you share your writing with?

19. Why do you write - for a living, to share something with the world, because it's therapeutic, to channel your creativity, or some other reason?

20. What is something these questions don't cover that you'd like to share?

Current Mood: accomplished
11:10 pm
[azurecobalt]
Writers' Challenge 2
Annual LiveJournal Rabbit Hole Day

...because I'm not too proud to steal my ideas from others. Unfortunately, I found out about this a bit too late to post it as a challenge ahead of time, but why let some arbitrary temporal scale stop us? Here's an excerpt of the idea from the creator's own post:

When you wake up on the 27th [that is, when you reply to this challenge - ed.], instead of writing about your usual work and school and politics and friends and relationship and stuff, experience life down the Rabbit Hole and write about the work, the school, the politics, the friends, the relationships, the stuff that you find there instead. Travel through time. Turn into an animal. Flee from assassins. Talk to your goldfish. Conquer Greenland. Sprout some extra limbs. Learn how to walk on water. Marry an insect.

So have at it! Write something bizarre and/or surreal! I'll comment with my own entry, because I love me some assassins.

~R

Current Mood: busy
10:59 pm
[azurecobalt]
Poll Time!
Below is a poll on some facets of the Writer Circle community. No one can see how you respond to this (not even me), so feel free to reveal your deep-seated hatred of LJ cuts or your desire for content warnings - whatever floats your boat.

Poll #662153 Writer Circle Questionnaire

About how often should we do writers challenges?

Once a day
0(0.0%)
2-3 times a week
1(9.1%)
Once a week
7(63.6%)
2-3 times a month
3(27.3%)
Once a month
0(0.0%)

How do you feel about LJ cut?

I'm fine with long posts on my friends' page
0(0.0%)
I don't care either way
1(9.1%)
I prefer long entires to be lj-cut
8(72.7%)
I hate it when people are anal about lj-cuts. Relax!
2(18.2%)

Content Warnings

I don't feel we need to worry about warnings - we're all adults here
7(63.6%)
I'd like there to be warnings - so I know what I'm getting into
4(36.4%)
I only think we need warnings for "triggering" events
0(0.0%)


~R

Current Mood: curious
Tuesday, January 17th, 2006
9:42 pm
[azurecobalt]
This and that...
A couple of things...

* Challenges. First of all, people have already contributed some really great responses to the first writers' challenge. Go add your own! I'm envisioning this as a weekly thing, but we'll see how it goes.

* Workshopping. I'm going to post some guidelines about workshopping. Some things like what writers should preface their pieces with (what sorts of critiques they're looking for - "I'm concerned about the dialogue, so feedback on that is appreciated", information about the piece, and so on) and how readers should respond. These are only guidelines, as well. Not everyone's been in a workshop before, and it's definitely a skill in its own right.

* Posting. Even though I created this community and moderate it, I don't want to be a leader type around here. I'd like this community to be a democratic place - a communist place, dare I say? - where writers do what works for them. Create your own challenges, share your work, ask questions, share your ideas, ask for help, share links, give advice - whatever! That being said, I hope we can agree on some basic guidelines (I seem to be overusing that word), such as play nice, LJ-cut your stories, don't be a dick, etc. I want this to be a friendly place where we're all comfortable sharing our creativity. I also hope it's an open enough place for people to share any kind of writing. Do we really need to have warnings here (OMG! NC-17!!!11)? I hope not. But again, if people want that sort of thing, I'll play along.

* New Members. As we've just "opened," we have a lot of new members. I'm thinking about doing an "introduce yourself" post for people to talk a bit about themselves and about their writing. Is this a good idea? Is it a little too touchy-feely? Give me some feedback.

Write on (I can't help myself sometimes),
~R

Current Mood: quixotic
8:39 pm
[delein]
A Cheap Way To Be Rich
by Thomas Bachand


On a pier I met a man with a binder who enticed me to his resort with pictures of a beach, volleyball, and cliff-side bungalows. He escorted me to a small truck where I squeezed onto a small bench fit tightly into the back. Beside me was an Irishman with a week's worth of stubble on the top of his head. He had been on the road for sixteen years, working only occasionally, on fishing boats in Norway, apple orchards in New Zealand, and as an English teacher all across Asia. Most recently he studied Buddhism under a Canadian at a Kathmandu monastery.

"You learn to focus on the here and now," he said of the monastic life. "The past is gone. The future is not worth bothering about."

He never could get used to the solitude, though. It was like doing penance.

"I can't wait to get back to the beach," I said.

"You've come to the right place, mate," piped up an Englishman staying at the resort. His exaltations were impressive - the food was delicious, the environment relaxing and the staff he considered personal friends.

We maneuvered muddy roads underneath the island's lush canopy before being deposited on the outskirts of a fishing village, on a beach rimmed with coral and shaded by palms. There we waited for a boat. A cooling breeze off the emerald waters gently tugged at my shirt. At once I felt at peace. Falling away were the accumulated strains of the road from Bali to India to Bangkok - jarring buses and rolling ferries, the grab bag diplomacy and perpetual negotiation, the flea ridden mattresses in the dingy hotels secreted in muddy alleys. Destination after destination I had always pressed on. Now, I felt I could stay, stay for a long while.

No sooner had our boat arrived that we were bouncing across the white caps toward a rocky point at the edge of the forest.

"How far is it?" I called to the Englishman over the reverberations of the engine.

"Over there." He pointed to a rocky peninsula.

"Beyond the point?" yelled the Irishman.

"Just before it," he shouted back.

Both the Irishman and I strained to see the beach but could not for the rocks. The boat steered for the heart of the jagged coast.

"Where abouts is it?" I asked.

"Right there," the Englishman shouted again. The engine reeled as we lurched over choppy open water. He pointed as before.

"I don't see a beach, just the rocks," said the Irishman.

"That's it," said the Englishman.

The Irishman and I looked at one another.

There was indeed a beach - a strip of sand no more than forty feet long, tucked in a shaded inlet characterized by rough boulders. Later over a bowl of noodles the Irishman asked me what I thought of the owner's photo album.

"I'd say he picked his angles carefully."

That night I tossed and turned in my cliff-side bungalow. I was not accustomed to the crashing surf, nor the bat fluttering in the rafters above the mosquito net. The interior of my bamboo and thatch bungalow, the bat had discovered, was as good a place as any to find flying insects. And then there were the ants. They were holding a shindig under the mattress and would periodically come topside for a piece of my flesh. I was up at dawn and when I ran into the proprietor on the beach I reported my ant problem. Shortly he appeared with a can of Raid and proceeded to douse the underside of the mattress and the floorboards with insecticide. Somehow the beach life wasn't measuring up.

After breakfast I hoisted my pack onto my shoulders, bid the Irishman well, and set out on the trail circumscribing the rocky coast. In under an hour I had reached the fishing village where the truck had dropped us the afternoon before. A mile beyond I came to a collection of deserted bungalows tucked neatly in a palm forest fronting a sweeping coral beach. The only sign of habitation was a dour-faced woman dozing in a chair in the restaurant. I woke her and with hardly a word she escorted me to a sturdy bungalow of wood and thatch. Cognizant of the peacefulness, I settled in quietly. The soothing, rhythmic surf massaged the shore. A passing breeze stirred the trees. With a novel I retired to my hammock and slept away the afternoon.

I awoke to see a sandy bearded American strolling up the beach, his freckled face shaded by a drooping straw hat. For three days he had had the beach to himself, he told me. He suggested that I go into town for meals, otherwise I would only find noodles.

"I ordered vegetables and rice for lunch," he said. "She brought me fried noodles. She says she's not going to buy food if no one is staying here. I told her no one is staying here because she's not buying food."

John was an aging drop out from the 1960's who had been on the move most of his life. Rarely had he held a conventional job. Originally from Ohio, he moved to Florida, lived on a sailboat, and worked in construction. During the early 1980's he smuggled drugs in his spare time. He and a couple of buddies rented a home in Columbia from which they would mail small envelopes of cocaine to friends.

"There's nothing illegal about receiving illegal drugs in the mail," he said. "Besides, the DEA doesn't have the time to chase down two grams of coke."

With gleeful irony he noted that the US Postal Service was the largest drug smuggler in the world.

John's hobby encountered difficulties when the letters turned to packages, and then to parcels.

"A couple of grams in an anonymous envelope is one thing," he said. "A box with a couple of pounds is another. It was making me nervous. I felt like we were playing Russian Roulette."

They were, but not with the American government. One night a band of guerrillas with AK 47's knocked on their door. John figured they were angry with he and his friends for working their territory. They played it cool and invited them in.

"Across the table one of them says to us, 'I hear you been smuggling coke.' Everyone knew. You can't hide that kind of thing when you're the only gringos in town. Then he says, 'You want coke, we can give you coke.'"

Reaching into his coat the soldier pulled out a back issue of Soldier of Fortune.

"We give you the coke for free," he said, opening the magazine and turning the pages. "First you bring us one of these and one of these and one of these..." They pointed to ads for pistols, rifles, Uzi's, and whatever else struck their fancy.

"They were like kids in candy store," John said. "That's when I bailed out. My friends kept at it. Guns one way, drugs the other. Eventually they got caught."

John became lost in contemplation.

"Money's the worst drug of all," he said, finally. "People will do things for money that under other circumstances they'd never consider."

After Columbia John spent a number of years living out of a tent, alternating his time between Alaska and Hawaii. Eventually he returned to Florida where he was contracted to build throwaway homes on reef islands. After the monsoon season, developers took to the skies looking for islands created by sand pushed onto the coral reefs. They would lay down an airstrip, partition out lots, and build makeshift houses to be sold to idle rich looking for private getaways. The next monsoon season would rearrange the map and John would start over again. It was an unconventional life, I remarked. I wondered if he had ever missed the stability that went with home?

"I began running on survival instincts when they began drafting us out of high school," he said. "The government was trying to kill a whole generation for profit. The protesters and counter culture tried to change the world and when they couldn't they decided to join the club and make money. Meanwhile we get Guatemala, Iran Contra, Panama, the CIA smuggling drugs. Makes you wonder if anyone reads the papers? Every time I think of staying put in America, the hypocrisy starts eating at me."

My memory of Vietnam was that of a five-year-old boy, the youngest of seven children, wondering if his older brothers were going to be sent off to the horror depicted on the nightly news. The weekly drive to swim lessons took us through the heart of Berkeley where soldiers were posted on every corner. Lyndon Johnson's campaign ad depicting a little girl with a daisy counting down to nuclear annihilation gave me nightmares. To my child's mind, war was seen as a constant. Yet, times did change. When Vietnam dropped out of view and conflict revisited America's door, foreign entanglements became "operations." American casualties were kept to a minimum and the public went about its business.

"Most people don't have time for politics," I said. "They're too busy trying to be productive. Getting by is already too much. They just want some satisfaction."

"I wish I could believe that," John said. "Satisfaction is driven by politics." I had barely digested that when he threw me a curve. "America's already too productive. By god, look at the moon shots," he said, energy coming to his voice. "For millennium men have looked to the moon and fantasized about going there? The Americans actually went and did it!"

We had been talking for hours. The glow of sunset had faded and all that remained in the moonless dark was the lapping of the surf.

"We all can't go to the moon," he said. "America can't be the model the world aspires to - we're six percent of the world using half the resources. The world can't handle American productivity on a global scale. People should try not doing things. Don't cut down the trees. Don't drive your car. Don't go to work."

He laughed and reached into his rucksack and took out a short wave radio the size of a pack of cigarettes. He told me how strange it was to intercept the news bounced off the atmosphere by the BBC. Conflicts, mergers, summits, currency fluctuations and devaluations - they were all odd snippets out of context in a vagabond world. Out of perspective they took on a new perspective.

"If people stayed home," he said, "and enjoyed themselves more often the world would be a much better place. I'm beginning to think we're all trying to be entertained. Pick your meditation: money, work, art, religion - it's all to keep us occupied."

It was my turn to laugh. "Now I don't feel so bad for getting nothing done all day."

"I get more head trips put on me. Hey, if that's what you want to do, go for it. As long as you respect all life, any lifestyle is just as valid as the next. Life is not right or wrong, it just is."

The only asset John had ever owned was a sailboat. Without an address there was no need for rent or taxes. It was his way of not contributing to the chaos. Eventually he collected his profits, sold the boat and came to Thailand, hoping to live off the interest while he enjoyed the warm, clear waters which he described as perfect for boating and snorkeling. He would stay until the money ran out or he changed his fancy.

He lit up a joint and said, "I think it was Mark Twain who said, 'Living below your means is a cheap way to be rich'?"
Monday, January 16th, 2006
10:09 pm
[azurecobalt]
Writers' Challenge 1
In order to kick things off here, I thought I'd start with a challenge to you writers out there. Here's something easy to get you started.

The challenge:

Write a 500(ish) word scene that uses only dialogue. No narrative descriptions, no dialogue tags. Just dialogue. The topic can be anything you choose.

Post your response as a comment to this entry.

Go!

~R
Thursday, January 12th, 2006
5:10 pm
[azurecobalt]
Welcome Message!
Here is the obligatory welcome message for Writer Circle!

Greetings and welcome to writers of all backgrounds: novelists, poets, playwrights, scriptwriters, journalists, biographers, essayists, historians, lyricists, academics, critics, fanfiction writers - whatever your label.

Writer Circle is the place to share your work with other writers. Here you will find like-minded people of the creative persuasion who will provide constructive criticism to help you grow as a writer.

Writer Circle is also the place to provide constructive criticism for others. Workshopping is a community effort where writers can come together and help one another sharpen their skills. Take the time to read and comment on others' works, and in turn you can expect others to help you.

Enjoy your stay here at Writer Circle. Share a story, give some feedback, or simply read and enjoy.

Cheers,
~Rob

Current Mood: optimistic
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